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My Risk To Take

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Loved the style of writing here Sammie. Oh, my leddi feels! Why did she have to go and leave him. <img src='http://www.holby.tv/community/public/style_emoticons//sad.gif&#8217; class=’bbc_emoticon’ alt=’:(‘ /> Again, brilliant writing Sammie.

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Aww. That is just beautiful. So many great lines, so simple yet so deep. You haven't fallen into the trap of over-writing, which is brilliant. I especially like this one –

[i]'He saved three lives that day. He wished he could have saved her too.'[/i]

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As amazing as I've come to expect from you. Characterisation is just [i]perfect,[/i] couldn't be more Luc and Eddi if it tried. I loved the story, and the way you've written the passing of time. Brilliant, just brilliant <img src='http://www.holby.tv/community/public/style_emoticons//smile.gif&#8217; class=’bbc_emoticon’ alt=’:)’ />

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Hi Sammie,
A very heart-warming read. I had a lump in my throat when I was reading this. This is such a lovely story. Thanks for sharing.

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